Whistling Boy in the Graveyard
Written by
Jason Erickson
FADE IN:
EXT. FIELD - DAY
Flashes of light resolve into an interlaced VIDEO IMAGE.
THE SHEPHERD (64), flowing robe, headdress, staff, stands in a flock of plywood sheep. He gives the lens a fatherly glance.
SHEPHERD
It's a good day to be a shepherd.
INT. SARA'S BEDROOM - DAY
SARA (12), long dark hair, determined eyes, blue shirt and tan slacks, studies the Shepherd on an old television.
Not mesmerized. Taking notes.
On the floor: a cardboard obstacle course built for three ANTS wearing pocket-lint fleeces. Plastic spider. Human shoe. Poison can with skull and crossbones.
Sara taps a toothpick staff.
TAP. TAP-TAP.
The ants turn. One strays toward the spider. Another heads directly for the poison.
Sara moves the poison can two inches. The ant finds a path around it.
SHEPHERD (TV)
Now go. Serve and protect.
All three reach the end.
Sara opens her palm. A red gumdrop. Two ants race to it. She removes their lint.
The third stays beside her toothpick.
SARA
I don't want you to go either.
She sets the gumdrop and two ants on the window ledge. They break off pieces and leave.
SARA (CONT'D)
Remember what you learned.
She offers a finger to the remaining sheep-ant. It climbs on.
SARA (CONT'D)
What's next is more dangerous. You sure?
The ant keeps climbing.
Sara puts it on her shoulder, stuffs a child-sized SHEPHERD ROBE into her backpack. Home-sewn, the hem stitched small and even. She knocks twice on a poster:
SHEP AND HIS HERD. SERVE AND PROTECT.
SARA (CONT'D)
Serve and protect.
EXT. MARTHA'S GARDEN - DAY
MARTHA (42), kind face, hair tied back, works in a living, unruly garden. A bulky CAMCORDER records from a tripod.
A Japanese HORI HORI blade enters the earth beside a weed.
Extract.
Sara darts from the house.
SARA
See ya, Mom.
MARTHA
Sara.
Sara stops.
MARTHA (CONT'D)
Day in the life. Fifteen years from now. You've graduated from grad school. You have a good job that...
SARA
Later? Please? I've got to go.
MARTHA
Promise?
SARA
Yeah. We'll talk.
MARTHA
No shepherding kids at school.
SARA
Just a little herding? This is going to be a very low-herding day.
MARTHA
No herding.
Silence.
MARTHA (CONT'D)
NO herding. Understand?
SARA
Yeah. No herding.
MARTHA
Not even adults.
Sara stops. Her mother thinks she is capable of that?
SARA
Who do you think I am?!
MARTHA
I don't want you kicked out.
SARA
I know.
Martha looks from Sara to the camera.
MARTHA
You finish school. Machine school. Good job. New York if you want it. You align yourself with the future and nobody has to worry.
SARA
Nobody?
MARTHA
Start with me.
Sara kisses her cheek and runs.
Martha turns back to the camera, unsure whether she just recorded a promise or made one.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
MATT (12), small, glasses, clothes clumped over other clothes, catches Sara.
MATT
You ready?
SARA
Can't.
MATT
What?
SARA
Promised my mom.
MATT
A shepherd cannot NOT help someone.
SARA
This shepherd has to get through school.
Matt spots the sheep-ant.
MATT
You brought a firstborn.
SARA
I think so.
MATT
Mine keep running into the shoe.
SARA
Maybe you have too many shoes.
MATT
I have two.
SARA
A lot for an ant.
MATT
Who do you think we'll save today?
SARA
Nobody.
MATT
That's the worst number.
EXT. SCHOOL SIDE ENTRANCE - DAY
Sara and Matt approach the doors.
KEN DOUSE (12), carefully combed hair, school-paper notebook pressed to his chest, waits for Sara.
KEN
Teach me one.
SARA
One what?
KEN
The thing that makes people listen.
Sara looks toward the school. Toward the office windows.
SARA
I don't do that anymore.
KEN
Since when?
SARA
Since now.
KEN
I could carry your staff. Or train the ants. I can start lower.
MATT
Ants are fairly low.
KEN
Not compared to him.
Matt checks beneath his shoe.
SARA
You can't just decide you're a shepherd. It's...
The warning bell interrupts her. She enters with Matt.
Ken remains outside.
He writes something in his notebook, then crosses it out.
INT. SCHOOL LOCKER ROOM - DAY
Sara changes into the shepherd robe. The sheep-ant waits on her backpack.
INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY - DAY
Sara walks alone in full shepherd garb. Laughter follows her.
A TEACHER gives her the two-finger I'm-watching-you sign.
Sara whispers to the ant now back on her shoulder.
SARA
Don't mind them.
Matt, still clumpy and undercover, gives her a stealthy thumbs-up.
EXT. SCHOOL PLAYGROUND - DAY
The pale BOY (12), hair combed to the side, corduroy jacket, sits alone against the fence.
Children play around him without including him or excluding him. He has perfected being missed.
Across the yard, in the lee of the jungle gym, where teachers cannot see, a gang of BULLIES shoves a smaller child.
The Boy watches.
He turns one wrist. He looks down at a dark BIRTHMARK on it.
He checks the school clock.
Then closes his hand and walks toward the bullies.
Across the playground, Sara and Matt sit on swings.
Matt works his first shirt button.
MATT
Some kids name-calling over there.
SARA
Hmm.
MATT
What if something grave happens? You still not going to act?
SARA
How grave?
MATT
The serious kind.
SARA
My mom was serious.
The smaller child falls.
The Boy steps between him and the raised fists.
BOY
Go.
The smaller child goes.
The Boy begins to WHISTLE.
Quiet. Steady.
BULLY 1 notices him.
BULLY 1
What's that supposed to be?
The Boy says nothing.
Bully 1 shoves him down. The others form a ring. A HUMAN SCREEN hiding the beating.
Matt gets his second button open.
MATT
Serious enough?
Sara grips the swing chains.
MATT (CONT'D)
Sara.
Matt pulls off his outer shirt. Shepherd robe underneath. His pants refuse to cooperate.
MATT (CONT'D)
Cooome on.
The ring tightens. Fists inside dust.
Sara looks toward the teachers. Nobody sees.
MATT (CONT'D)
He needs you.
Matt trips in his half-removed pants.
MATT (CONT'D)
I need you.
Sara closes her eyes.
SARA
Sorry, Mom.
She jumps from the swing.
Sara runs a tightening path across the playground, selectively CLAPPING.
CLAP. CLAP-TAP. CLAP.
Children move out of her way, then together. Their bodies take on the rhythm of sheep. A herd forms without deciding to.
Ken is caught at its edge.
His feet shift with everyone else's before he chooses to move.
He looks down at them. Then at Sara.
She said she did not do this anymore.
Inside the ring, the Boy looks at the sky. Not frightened. Ready.
He keeps whistling.
Bully 1 raises a final fist.
BULLY 1
Fist of fire.
A bully looks up.
BULLY 2
Stampede!
Sara drives the herd at the ring. The human screen breaks. The beating becomes visible.
Teachers finally look.
TEACHER 2
Got to admit, that's damn impressive...
TEACHER 1
There's no herding students, Bob.
Sara breaks the herd apart and reaches him.
TEACHER 1
(under his breath)
Damn shepherds.
Bully 1 drops the Boy and runs.
The Boy stirs. Squints up. Sara is backlit by the sun. Angelic.
BOY
Am I--?
Sara kneels and helps him sit up.
SARA
You'll be fine. What were you...?
The Boy realizes who it is. The robe. The girl inside it.
He collapses back to the ground. Eyes closed.
SARA (CONT'D)
Hey. You okay?
Nothing.
SARA (CONT'D)
They're gone. You're safe.
The eyes stay closed.
Matt arrives, finally free of his pants. Full shepherd.
MATT
Serve and protect, baby.
He notices Sara's shoulder.
MATT (CONT'D)
Your ant.
Sara feels for it. Nothing.
SARA
No.
She spins, searching among hundreds of shoes.
SARA (CONT'D)
Too many shoes!
TEACHER 1 grabs her arm.
TEACHER 1
Come with me.
SARA
Wait! I have to find him. He's good, but there are too many shoes!
The teacher drags her away and collects Matt with the other hand.
MATT
You have the wrong people.
SARA
Too many shoes!
At ground level, the sheep-ant dodges soles, crosses the dust and climbs the Boy's corduroy leg.
It reaches his shoulder.
The Boy stands.
The ant's lint moves in the breeze.
EXT. SCHOOL STEPS - LATE AFTERNOON
Teachers question Sara and Matt behind closed doors.
Outside, Ken interviews BULLY 2 with his notebook open.
KEN
You saw her make everybody move?
BULLY 2
I don't know. There was clapping and then Bobby ran and I thought maybe a fire drill but nobody said...
Ken SNAPS once.
The bully stops. Not obedience...not yet. Nobody has ever wanted his account of anything before.
KEN
Start with the scary part.
BULLY 2
My legs moved before I told them to.
Ken writes that down exactly.
Across the steps, the smaller child Finely protected waits alone for a ride.
Ken sees him.
Does not interview him.
EXT. ROAD - LATE AFTERNOON
Sara walks home in normal clothes, fighting tears. Matt catches up.
MATT
Sent home early. My parents are going to kill me. I don't care. That was awesome!
Sara stops.
MATT (CONT'D)
Right?
She hurls her backpack deep into the woods.
MATT (CONT'D)
Sara. That was your shepherd uniform...
Sara runs home.
EXT. GRAVEYARD - DUSK
The Boy enters with the sheep-ant on his shoulder.
People emerge among the stones and occupy predetermined places. Children. Adults. Old people.
They WHISTLE a familiar tune.
The Boy does not.
One by one, the whistlers notice. The tune thins around the stones, then stops.
They gather around him. Not close. Nobody wants to be close.
A middle-aged MAN checks his watch.
MAN
(whispering)
What are you doing here?
The Boy tries to whistle.
Only air.
BOY
I don't know. Didn't expire...
Silence.
Then the whispering starts.
WHISPER 1
Was his wrong?
WHISPER 2
It can't be wrong. That'd mean mine's wrong.
WHISPER 1
Is it? Maybe it is.
WHISPER 3
Shhh.
They look at the Boy for more.
He has nothing else. He looks toward the school.
WHISPER 1
He doesn't know.
WHISPER 2
Then I don't know either.
WHISPER 4
Of course you know.
The Boy closes his eyes.
WHISPER 3
(barely air)
I feel sick.
One whistler walks away, fast.
The others watch him go.
Then, one by one, they leave.
Not angry. Afraid.
Soon the Boy is alone with the sheep-ant.
Across town, Sara's discarded backpack lies open in the woods. The empty robe sleeve shifts like something breathing.
INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY - NEXT DAY
A mimeographed SCHOOL PAPER passes from hand to hand.
Its headline:
MY LEGS MOVED BEFORE I TOLD THEM TO
Below it: SHEPHERD GIRL TAKES CONTROL OF PLAYGROUND.
Sara reads over another student's shoulder.
At the far end of the hall, Ken watches people read.
For the first time, they move toward something he made.
MONTAGE - THE END OF SHEP
-- Ken's sentence appears in a letter to the editor.
-- A parent repeats it at a school-board meeting.
PARENT
Their legs moved before they told them to.
-- A local anchor repeats it over footage of a shepherd's crook slashed red.
ANCHOR (TV)
Parents are asking whether behavioral control is being sold to children as play.
-- Ken watches from his living-room floor. Adults are using his words.
-- A sponsor card vanishes from the end of SHEP AND HIS HERD.
-- The Shepherd gives his fatherly glance to an audience that is no longer there.
SHEPHERD (TV)
It's a good day to be a shepherd.
-- STATIC consumes him.
-- Sara removes the SHEP poster from her wall. Martha replaces it with a handwritten list:
1. SCHOOL
2. MACHINE SCHOOL
3. ALIGN WITH MACHINES
-- Ken practices snapping in his bedroom mirror.
END MONTAGE
TITLE OVER BLACK:
TWELVE YEARS LATER
INT. BUS - DAY
SARA (24) watches her hometown return through the glass.
On her lap: a suitcase, a textbook on machine languages, and a grant application stamped SUBMISSION #184773-88E.
Her blue shirt and tan slacks fit perfectly.
Outside, the town has aged without changing casts.
A CHILD FROM THE PLAYGROUND, grown now, unlocks the convenience store.
TEACHER 2, older, directs traffic around the same school fence.
The BUS DRIVER was once the girl who sat behind Sara in math. They recognize each other in the mirror.
BUS DRIVER
Machine school?
SARA
Finished.
BUS DRIVER
Knew somebody would.
EXT. ROAD / SARA'S HOUSE - DAY
Sara walks past the graveyard, laundromat, convenience store, gas station.
Martha's garden is lost beneath weeds.
MATT (O.S.)
Fore!
A dandelion explodes from a golf-club swing. Seeds drift into Sara's yard.
Adult MATT (24), still built as if his clothes won an argument, lowers his club.
MATT
You came back.
SARA
For a week.
MATT
Right. A week.
They hug. He holds on one beat too long, then disguises the release as a look at her suitcase.
MATT (CONT'D)
A whole week. For your mom?
SARA
Mom. And the house.
Matt is already eyeing his next dandelion. The second part sails past him.
MATT
Parents moved to Vegas. I'm protecting the house from sensible use.
SARA
They left?
MATT
Temporarily. Nobody really leaves here. Everyone comes back. Or they don't... and send for their furniture.
SARA
That's the whole list?
MATT
In my lifetime? Furniture twice.
He tees another dandelion.
MATT (CONT'D)
Rorschach seed therapy.
SARA
Inkblots with weeds.
MATT
Inkblots are trapped on paper. These are alive.
He swings. Seeds fill the air.
MATT (CONT'D)
What do you see?
SARA
A future argument with every lawn on this street.
MATT
Soft gaze.
SARA
I have a one-week gaze.
MATT
How's your mom?
SARA
Good. I think. Same day over and over.
MATT
You should try this on her.
SARA
She was specific about what she wanted.
MATT
Her time machine.
SARA
Her time machine.
MATT
After the week?
SARA
If the grant comes through, I go straight to New York. Machine-language program. Digital packets.
MATT
New York City?
SARA
Is there another one?
MATT
I don't know.
He strikes too hard. The dandelion head vanishes into Cranky Tom's yard.
MATT (CONT'D)
Still aligning yourself with machines.
SARA
It's the future.
She says it in a ghost voice. He smiles, but the phrase lands somewhere older.
MATT
I thought when you finished, we could...
He looks at the suitcase.
INT. SARA'S HOUSE - DAY
Dust. Family photographs. A telephone with no dial tone.
Sara leans a flattened FOR SALE sign against the wall by the door, still in its plastic sleeve.
A realtor's card goes on the kitchen table, square to the edge.
Sara opens her childhood room. A checklist hangs where the Shepherd poster used to be:
1. SCHOOL
2. MACHINE SCHOOL
3. ALIGN WITH MACHINES
She straightens it.
EXT. CONVENIENCE STORE - DAY
At the payphone:
SARA
Grant submission one-eight-four-seven-seven-three-eight-eight-e.
She listens.
SARA (CONT'D)
No, I understand it's under review. I'm only here for a week. Could you...
Hold music. Tinny, looping, indifferent.
The loop comes around and starts again. At the seam, a small mechanical CLICK.
Sara stops being annoyed and starts being interested. That is not a tape. That is a computer, taking its turn on the line.
SARA (CONT'D)
Can you hear me?
Nobody is there to answer. She wasn't asking anybody.
She taps a machine rhythm into the receiver.
TAP. TAP-TAP. TAP-PITY-TAP.
The hold music stops mid-loop.
A pause with something listening inside it.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
That's... huh. Your file just came up. Decision within the week.
SARA
Thank you.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
Sure... I don't think I did anything... but yeah.
Sara hangs up gently, the way you set down something that might wake.
Inside the store, the CASHIER watches YOUR DAILY DOUSE beside a baseball bat.
INT. YOUR DAILY DOUSE STUDIO - DAY
A model living room arranged around hazards: frayed cord, loose rug, sinister houseplant.
KEN DOUSE (24), polished far beyond his years, stands in the center.
KEN DOUSE
The object most likely to injure you tonight may already know where you sleep.
SNAP.
An ASSISTANT powders his forehead and vanishes.
SNAP. SNAP.
The CAMERAMAN widens to reveal an ELECTRIC BLANKET on a satin pedestal.
He is BULLY 2, older now. Ken has been telling him where to put the frightening part since they were twelve.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
After the break: warmth, comfort, and the fire waiting underneath both.
The red tally light dies.
A frightened HOMEOWNER grips the blanket.
HOMEOWNER
Should I throw it away?
Ken checks the wiring with practiced fingers.
KEN DOUSE
No. This one's fine.
HOMEOWNER
But you said...
A PRODUCER points to the returning tally light.
Ken hands the blanket back and turns to camera.
KEN DOUSE
If it looks safe, experts warn, you may already be too close.
The Homeowner stares at the blanket as though it has changed.
Ken sees that.
He snaps and points.
The Assistant removes her from the frame.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK ASSISTED LIVING - DAY
Retro seventies brick. A DOUSE LANDSCAPING crew works the flowerbeds.
A sandwich board reads:
MAINTENANCE SPONSORED BY YOUR DAILY DOUSE.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - DAY
Televisions speak from every room.
KEN DOUSE (TV)
The warning signs are everywhere. More after this.
Sara signs in and follows the sound to...
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - DAY
Half garden, half hospital room.
MARTHA (54) watches a VHS of herself and Young Sara laughing in the old garden. She mouths along with her recorded self.
Sara lowers the volume and stands in front of the screen.
MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
MARTHA
How's grad school?
SARA
Finished. Got a great job.
MARTHA
Really? So happy for you.
SARA
Things are good. Great. No need to worry about me.
Martha sees her again.
MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
Sara hugs her. Martha returns to the tape.
Movers enter with PENNY (86), small, sharp-eyed, and a TELEVISION almost too large for the room.
PENNY
Window side.
MOVER
This is the window side.
PENNY
Then make another window.
Sara steps around the television and leaves.
INT. SARA'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Sara cleans while KEN DOUSE reports catastrophes from the television.
An ANT crosses the screen. Then another. She shoos them away.
She opens a drawer full of Martha's VHS tapes and replaces Douse with Martha gardening.
The room changes.
Onscreen, Young Martha extracts a weed, lowers a marigold, presses soil around it.
Extract. Plant. Nurture.
Sara stops cleaning.
SARA
Wish I could be in there with you.
She watches until morning.
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - DAY
Penny's giant television fills the room with Daily Douse.
Martha rocks, eyes fixed on Ken.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
Nothing.
Sara turns down Penny's television. Penny turns it back up.
SARA (CONT'D)
It's too loud for her.
PENNY
She's on her side.
Sara places a doll bonnet on Martha as blinders. Toilet-paper earplugs. Martha still turns toward Ken.
SARA
Lincoln and the Cadillac. You know the one about--
Nothing.
SARA (CONT'D)
Fuck. I don't remember either.
She takes Penny's remote, removes the batteries.
PENNY
How dare you.
FINELY (24), thin, brown hair, janitor's coveralls, appears with a mop.
He crosses to Penny's television and unplugs it.
PENNY
Nurse!
SARA
Thank you.
Without slowing, Finely unplugs Martha's television too.
Both screens die.
SARA (CONT'D)
Hey.
NURSE ELLIS (40s) enters. Efficient without rushing.
NURSE ELLIS
Who called?
PENNY
The janitor unplugged my television.
NURSE ELLIS
Again?
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
Sara catches Finely mopping.
SARA
My mother's tape isn't Daily Douse.
FINELY
Congratulations.
SARA
It keeps her in a good place.
FINELY
A fucking television is the cure to everything now.
SARA
It's not a cure.
FINELY
Then it won't mind being unplugged.
He moves on.
SARA
What's your name?
FINELY
Finely.
SARA
That's not a name.
FINELY
It has been expensive to change.
He disappears around the corner.
Back inside Martha's room, Sara plays the old Time Machine tape.
Martha does not return to it.
Sara looks at her mother. Then at the dead garden on the tape.
A problem she can solve.
EXT. MARTHA'S GARDEN - NIGHT
Sara sits on the porch, crying.
A red light bobs toward her. Matt, cigarette in his mouth, carries a sack of dirt bombs.
SARA
What are you doing?
MATT
Guerrilla gardening.
He notices her face. Offers the cigarette. She takes one drag and gives it back.
Matt offers a dirt bomb.
SARA
Not now.
MATT
Okay.
He puts the dirt bomb away, then thinks better of it and throws it into somebody else's yard.
MATT (CONT'D)
Different patient.
He leaves.
Sara sees Martha's Hori Hori beside a pot.
She picks it up.
Then attacks the garden.
Not pruning. Extracting. She drives the blade beside every weed and rips until grief becomes categories.
Night passes. The garden emerges.
Sara collapses in the turned soil as the sun rises.
INT. SARA'S HOUSE - MORNING
The television is on. YOUR DAILY DOUSE.
Onscreen, Ken holds up an ordinary kitchen sponge and makes it a threat in three moves. Show. Repeat. Point.
Sara stands in the doorway, soil to her elbows, too tired to change the channel.
Then she stops being tired.
She watches the way a locksmith watches a lock.
Three moves. Simple. Repeated. Aimed at the body, not the mind. It is how one man teaches a whole town to be afraid.
Nothing about the grammar requires the fear.
Sara looks at her soil-black hands.
Her mother's hands still know things. The tape just has to ask them.
SARA
Not with words...
She turns off Ken and digs the second VCR out of the closet.
Martha's old footage runs between two VCRs.
Sara edits.
The blade beside a weed.
EXTRACT.
A start lowered into earth.
PLANT.
Hands pressing soil, pouring water.
NURTURE.
She removes pauses, doubt, weather, worms and wrong decisions.
One long, careful extraction becomes three clean strikes and a pull. Easier to learn. Easier to repeat.
A beautiful, simple grammar remains.
She ejects the cassette and writes on the spine, in careful block letters:
SEP #1 -- GARDEN
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - DAY
Martha rocks in front of the Time Machine tape. Sara ejects it.
SARA
Changing things up.
Penny gives her the middle finger without looking away from Douse.
Sara inserts GARDEN.
Onscreen, a Hori Hori enters soil beside a weed.
Extract.
Nothing.
The video continues. Sara rewinds.
Extract.
Nothing.
Sara rewinds, looks at Martha and gives a quick clap.
Martha adjusts. Her hand copies the motion against her blanket.
Sara holds her breath.
Onscreen, Young Martha lowers a marigold into a prepared hole.
Plant.
Martha continues extracting.
Her hand reaches to Penny's bedside table and closes around a silk flower in Penny's water cup.
She pulls it out.
PENNY
Hey.
Martha reaches for another.
Sara catches her wrist.
SARA
No, Mom. Different part.
She turns Martha's hand palm-up and places the silk flower in it.
Onscreen, young hands press soil around the marigold.
Nurture.
Martha presses the silk flower flat between both palms.
Sara studies the response.
Then rewinds to the extraction shot.
Martha resumes the motion in sync.
SARA (CONT'D)
Good. Yeah, this is good.
Penny takes her flower back.
PENNY
For who?
The corner of Martha's mouth lifts.
Sara sees it.
Joy wins the argument.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - DAY
Sara passes Finely.
SARA
Thanks for not unplugging it.
FINELY
I haven't made the whole hallway yet.
SARA
She's moving again.
Finely looks through the doorway.
Martha's hand: extract, plant, nurture.
FINELY
Then I can mop slowly.
EXT. ROAD / NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY
Dandelions everywhere now.
CRANKY TOM stands in his ruined lawn.
CRANKY TOM
Where are all these damn dandelions coming from?
Matt waves from down the street.
Tom does not wave back.
INT. MATT'S KITCHEN - DAY
A card table full of dandelion seed and mud.
Sara holds up a dirt bomb.
SARA
You're infecting the neighborhood.
MATT
Cultures with more snow are more introspective. Kinder. We don't have snow.
SARA
Because this isn't therapy.
MATT
Cranky Tom waves now.
SARA
He was swatting a bee.
MATT
The intent was communal.
SARA
You pick the stimulus, force it into people's yards and declare their response a cure.
MATT
You put a video in front of your mother and rewind when she does the wrong thing.
A beat.
Matt regrets the accuracy before Sara does.
SARA
Mine works.
MATT
Not the same as being right...
SARA
I'm about to get a substantial grant. I'm aligning myself. She doesn't have to worry. I'm set. I'm good.
MATT
Didn't say you weren't.
He looks at the two dirt bombs in her hands. A matched set.
MATT (CONT'D)
I thought we'd work together again.
SARA
On this?
MATT
Not this. Something less... obviously terrible.
SARA
You never asked.
MATT
You were coming home.
SARA
I'm visiting home.
That distinction has never occurred to him.
SARA (CONT'D)
And keep your weeds out of my yard. I'm selling the house.
The kitchen goes still.
MATT
Selling?
SARA
The realtor says buyers decide at the curb. My curb is your therapy session...
MATT
You can't sell it. Your mom's garden is...
SARA
Under two feet of your dandelions.
Matt starts pacing.
MATT
I'll mow it. Free. Forever. Lawn Therapy. It's new.
SARA
Matt.
MATT
Rent it out. I'll screen the tenants. I have a questionnaire...
SARA
Matt.
MATT
Everyone comes back or sends for their furniture. That's the rule. If you sell the house...
SARA
Then I'm sending for all of it.
Matt looks at the dirt bombs on the table like they betrayed him.
She leaves.
MATT
Cranky Tom waved.
Sara gives him the finger through the window.
INT. FINELY'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Dark except for a streetlight across the ceiling.
Adult Finely sleeps badly.
A BEEP cuts through the room.
INT. GROCERY STORE - STOCKROOM - DAY - DREAM
The BOY (9) helps PEDRO (63) price canned goods.
A grocery SCANNER sits between them. Its cord has been repaired with black tape.
The Boy scans a can of corn.
BEEP.
The display flashes:
EXPIRATION: MARCH 17, 1977.
Pedro marks the carton and reaches for the next can.
The scanner passes over the dark BIRTHMARK inside the Boy's wrist.
BEEP.
EXPIRATION: MARCH 17, 1977.
The Boy freezes.
He turns his wrist under the scanner again.
BEEP.
Same date.
Again.
BEEP.
Same date.
BOY
I'll expire on March seventeenth. In three years?
PEDRO
Sí.
BOY
That's right? Always right?
PEDRO
Sí, sí.
The Boy looks at his marked wrist.
The machine repeats itself.
EXT. GRAVEYARD - SERIES OF DREAM IMAGES
-- The Boy stands among the stones and tries to whistle. Only breath.
-- Rain. He tries again. One clean note.
-- Winter. He whistles while a FUNERAL passes beyond the iron fence.
-- A grieving WOMAN stops to listen. Hair tied back. Soil on the knees of her funeral dress.
-- Spring. The Woman kneels at the new grave, planting a marigold. She whistles beside him while she works.
-- Seasons turn. A child joins them. Then a widower. Then others among the stones.
-- Fearful people learning to hold one steady note in the face of what is coming.
-- The Boy turns his birthmarked wrist toward the sky. The scanner BEEPS beneath the whistling.
INT. FINELY'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Finely wakes.
The whistling is gone.
He turns his inner wrist toward the streetlight, then looks at the clock: 12:07 A.M.
He tries one note.
Only air.
He pulls on a black hoodie and leaves.
EXT. MATT'S YARD - MIDNIGHT
Sara, Ramones shirt, black pants, two Hori Horis, murders dandelions in Matt's lawn.
Finely approaches in a black hoodie.
SARA
TV unplugger.
FINELY
Midnight gardener.
SARA
Sara.
FINELY
I know.
They shake.
He looks at the knives.
FINELY (CONT'D)
Matt's yard?
SARA
Guerrilla gardening.
FINELY
A surprise.
SARA
At midnight.
FINELY
Cool.
He leaves.
Sara watches him go, confused.
He returns with an old SCYTHE.
FINELY (CONT'D)
Garage sale.
SARA
You just carry that around?
FINELY
Mostly I carry the disappointment of not carrying it.
He puts up his hood.
They work.
The scythe arcs. Hori Horis flash. Dandelion heads fly like small moons.
INT. MATT'S KITCHEN - SAME
Matt wears his childhood shepherd robe over work clothes stiff with mud.
At the card table, he packs dandelion seeds into dirt balls. Dozens of them. His hands, sleeves, robe. All filthy.
He rolls the last ball and looks out the window.
Across the dark yard, a HOODED FIGURE swings a SCYTHE.
We know Finely. Matt does not.
Each arc brings the figure closer to the house. Dandelion heads rise around him like souls with very short appointments.
Matt goes pale.
MATT
The Grim Reaper.
He looks at the rows of dirt balls. At his ruined crop falling outside.
MATT (CONT'D)
No.
He tries to brush off the dirt on his shepherd robe. Makes it worse.
MATT (CONT'D)
Not in a dirty shepherd robe.
Outside, the scythe falls.
INT. MATT'S LAUNDRY ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Matt fights the robe, shirt and trousers at once.
MATT
Cooome on.
A sleeve traps his head. A button refuses absolution.
MATT (CONT'D)
I can't die like this...
The clothes finally release him. He stands in boxer shorts and stuffs the robe into the washer.
Detergent. Too much.
He presses START.
Water strikes the glass.
EXT. MATT'S YARD - SAME
Finely cuts another row.
Sara extracts roots behind him.
From Matt's window, only the hood and scythe are visible.
INT. MATT'S LAUNDRY ROOM - SAME
Matt watches the washer churn.
He glances toward the door.
No knock.
Back to the washer.
Mud lifts from the robe and clouds the water.
Matt checks the window. The hooded figure is closer.
MATT
Faster.
He stops the washer mid-cycle and drags out the robe. Soaking wet, but clean enough to face eternity.
He wrings it badly and throws it into the dryer.
He drags in a lawn chair and places it directly before the glass.
Presses START.
THUMP.
The robe rises.
Falls.
THUMP.
Matt sits in his boxer shorts, hands on his knees, waiting for death.
The robe folds over itself. Sleeve becomes crook. Hem becomes hill. The old emblem disappears, returns, disappears.
Then something in the glass OPENS.
Not a picture. Not a memory. An understanding with motion in it.
The robe will not hold the shape Matt gave it. It cannot stand straight, look brave, hide its stains or arrange its emblem over its heart.
It falls without posing.
Rises without deciding to.
Falls again.
Matt is half naked before it. No gown. No theory. No audience to convince.
His breath catches.
MATT
Oh.
A laugh breaks out of him. It becomes a sob before he can stop it. He lets both happen.
He lunges for his notebook.
The pen finds the page.
Stops.
There is no sentence for this. He tries anyway...
THUMP.
The notebook slides off his knee.
He does not pick it up.
The dryer sounds less like machinery now than a large, patient heart.
The room's edges go soft.
For one turn the robe is the gown he wore at twelve.
For the next, something shed.
For the next, only cloth.
Matt looks down at himself. Mud on his bare knees. Boxer shorts. Nothing between his body and the ridiculousness of being alive.
Something inside him gives way.
Not breaks apart.
Breaks open.
He cries freely, watching the robe reveal and conceal itself faster than he can assign it meaning.
He stops trying to assign it meaning.
It gets better.
Time goes strange. The window darkens and pales.
THUMP.
Outside the small window, the scythe passes.
Matt does not see it. There is no room left in him tonight for death.
Sleep takes him mid-breath, upright in the lawn chair, hands open on his knees.
The robe keeps turning.
EXT. MATT'S YARD - LATER
The weeds are gone.
Sara and Finely sit in the clean wreckage.
FINELY
Sometimes old things provide the most value in life.
SARA
You trying to sell me the scythe?
FINELY
No. You'd be too good with it.
SARA
You see my mom today?
FINELY
Mesmerized by your gardening show.
SARA
SEP film.
FINELY
What?
SARA
Self Engineered Propaganda. Everyone in there soaks in Douse all day. Somebody else's fear, on a loop. Why settle for someone else's propaganda when you can make your own?
FINELY
Propaganda's a strong word.
SARA
That's why I put it on the label. If you're going to program somebody, sign your work.
FINELY
Sorry I didn't believe you.
SARA
You still don't.
FINELY
I believe she moved.
SARA
She could always see the future. So she picked the past to be hers.
FINELY
She was amazing, wasn't she?
SARA
She is.
Finely accepts the correction.
SARA (CONT'D)
What's Douse's arrangement with the home?
FINELY
He owns the signal. Sponsors the landscaping in exchange for watch time. Budget got cut. People call him a hero.
SARA
You don't.
FINELY
I take out my frustration by unplugging televisions and bringing agricultural weapons to dates.
SARA
This isn't a date.
FINELY
Then I have misused the scythe.
He checks his watch.
FINELY (CONT'D)
I have work in three hours.
SARA
Thanks.
FINELY
Anytime after midnight.
He walks away with the scythe on his shoulder.
Sara lies back in the clipped grass.
INT. MATT'S LAUNDRY ROOM - DAWN
The dryer is still.
Matt sleeps in the lawn chair. The notebook lies on the floor where it landed.
Sunlight reaches him.
His eyes open.
He touches his chest.
A heartbeat.
MATT
Still here.
The shepherd robe lies clean and warm inside the dryer.
Matt picks up the notebook. The page is blank.
It doesn't matter. He remembers all of it.
He looks at the morning.
He is suddenly moving.
He grabs the robe and his notebook.
He yanks an old CARDIGAN off a hook. Deep pockets, grandfather issue and pulls it over his bare chest.
He sweeps every quarter he can find into the cardigan pockets. They sag like feed bags.
He runs out in boxer shorts and cardigan, pockets CLANKING.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAWN
Matt bursts through the door, throws both arms wide and sends quarters flying.
MATT
Laundry's on me!
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - DAY
Martha and TED (86) perform the gardening motions with the tape.
Extract. Plant. Nurture.
Ted stops.
SARA
Ted?
TED
My shoulder hurts.
SARA
From the movement?
TED
From being eighty-six.
Sara lowers playback speed.
TED (CONT'D)
I didn't ask for slower.
SARA
It'll be easier.
TED
I didn't ask for easier.
Finely leans in the doorway.
FINELY
One hell of a pitching arm.
TED
I hate baseball.
SARA
Good to know.
But in her notebook she writes:
TED -- RANGE OF MOTION IMPROVING.
Finely sees.
Penny sees too.
PENNY
Put down he hates baseball.
Sara adds it in smaller letters.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Sara rides with a camcorder in her backpack.
She glances through the laundromat window.
Matt sits in boxer shorts before a dryer, crying at his clothes.
SARA
What the...? Matt?
BOOM.
She collides with the TATTOO MAN (83), covered in ink, carrying himself like an old star with no remaining audience.
They both go down.
Sara scrambles up.
SARA (CONT'D)
I'm so sorry.
TATTOO MAN
Nice running into you.
He stands with a limp.
SARA
Where are you going?
TATTOO MAN
Graveyard.
SARA
I can give you a ride. It's downhill.
He looks at the bicycle.
TATTOO MAN
You must have hit your head.
EXT. GRAVEYARD - DAY
The Tattoo Man dismounts from the back of Sara's bicycle.
TATTOO MAN
You coming in?
SARA
Visiting my mom at Sunny Brook.
TATTOO MAN
My Susan is there.
SARA
Who are you visiting here?
TATTOO MAN
Nobody. I dance here.
He enters.
Sara follows with her camcorder.
Under a tree, the Tattoo Man dances alone.
Sara films.
SARA
Why here?
TATTOO MAN
Helps me think. Or not think. One of the two.
SARA
You were a dancer?
TATTOO MAN
Actor. Wanted to be Jimmy Stewart.
SARA
What happened?
TATTOO MAN
Jimmy Stewart was already doing it.
He turns. On his hand: the SHEPHERD tattoo.
SARA
That tattoo.
TATTOO MAN
Cost more than the show paid.
SARA
You were Shep?
TATTOO MAN
One season. Plywood sheep had better representation.
He performs the fatherly look into Sara's camera. It is exact. Then ordinary again.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Canceled. Needed something more urgent.
SARA
But you still dance.
TATTOO MAN
While I can.
He taps a grave marker. A rhythm hidden inside stone.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
You hear it?
SARA
What?
TATTOO MAN
You will. Dance when you do.
He holds his back and sits.
Sara lowers the camera.
SARA
Well, should go. See my mom.
TATTOO MAN
Tell Susan I said hi.
SARA
Wanna come?
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY
Sara pedals uphill with the Tattoo Man on the back of the bicycle.
He does not help.
SARA
You could at least lean forward.
TATTOO MAN
I am emotionally.
They wobble into the parking lot.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - DAY
The Tattoo Man stops outside a common room.
SUSAN (82) folds a washcloth. Unfolds it. Folds it again.
He watches her.
Sara watches him watching her.
Nurse Ellis approaches with towels.
NURSE ELLIS
Back already?
TATTOO MAN
Boomerang today thanks to this lady.
Sara nods.
SARA
(still out of breath)
Least I could do...
INT. SUNNY BROOK COMMON ROOM - CONTINUOUS
The Tattoo Man sits across from Susan.
TATTOO MAN
Hello, Susan.
Susan keeps folding.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
You busy?
SUSAN
Yes.
TATTOO MAN
Me too.
He takes a HANDKERCHIEF from his pocket and copies her.
His fold is terrible.
Susan takes it, folds it correctly, and puts it in front of him.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Show-off.
He taps one finger on the table. Slow.
Fold. Tap.
Unfold. Tap.
The tapping adjusts to Susan.
Sara quietly opens her backpack.
The Tattoo Man sees the camera.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Susan, this is Sara. She makes movies.
SUSAN
Why?
SARA
I'm still figuring that out.
SUSAN
Don't get me in it.
SARA
Okay.
Sara frames only the Tattoo Man.
He stands and offers his hand.
TATTOO MAN
Would you care to dance?
SUSAN
No.
TATTOO MAN
Fair enough.
He sits. Keeps tapping.
One foot moves under the table.
Susan's foot moves once. Stops. Moves again.
He stands without offering his hand.
Susan watches him sway.
She stands.
He holds his hand too high.
Susan puts it down at his side. She takes his other hand and places it on her back.
Exactly where it belongs.
Her hand enters Sara's frame. Sara keeps Susan's face out.
The Tattoo Man's face changes.
Only for a moment.
They dance. Not well. Not far.
Susan corrects a turn before he makes it.
TATTOO MAN
Right.
They complete the turn.
Susan stops.
SUSAN
I have to wait for my husband.
The Tattoo Man lets go.
TATTOO MAN
Good idea.
Susan sits. Takes his handkerchief and folds it again.
He holds out his palm for it.
Susan looks at the palm, then puts the handkerchief in her own lap.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Keep it safe.
SUSAN
From who?
TATTOO MAN
Me, apparently.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
Sara and the Tattoo Man stand outside. Susan remains visible, refolding the handkerchief.
SARA
How did you do that?
TATTOO MAN
Poorly.
SARA
The tapping? Did she see your feet?
TATTOO MAN
I don't know.
SARA
But you do it every day.
TATTOO MAN
Most days we don't dance.
SARA
What do you do?
TATTOO MAN
Mostly this.
He looks in.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Yesterday she bit me. Day before she called me Jimmy Stewart.
SARA
That's good.
TATTOO MAN
Best review I ever got.
SARA
The dancing reaches her.
TATTOO MAN
Sometimes.
SARA
I could use the rhythm in the videos. Maybe if she saw--
TATTOO MAN
I'm not treating her.
SARA
What's the difference?
TATTOO MAN
She gets to say no.
SARA
She said no.
TATTOO MAN
Yep.
He smiles toward Susan.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
Then she changed her mind.
Sara looks at the camcorder.
TATTOO MAN (CONT'D)
You can use the dancing.
SARA
I only got you.
TATTOO MAN
That's enough of me.
He goes back inside.
Susan touches the folded handkerchief in her lap.
Sara places her empty hand where Susan placed his.
CUT TO:
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - DAY
Martha and Ted move their right hands in time with Sara's new movement tape.
Extract. Plant. Nurture. Turn.
Sara has edited the Tattoo Man into a grammar too.
Ted turns the wrong direction.
TED
He's backwards.
SARA
You're backwards.
TED
I was here first.
She reverses the tape.
Now the Tattoo Man dances backward. Ted nods, vindicated.
In the doorway, two more residents watch.
Finely wheels one of them in.
PENNY
Not Soul Train tryouts.
FINELY
You should try it.
PENNY
Like hell. I'm not turning into a zombie.
FINELY
Be an improvement.
Penny flips him off.
The room begins moving. Differently, badly, alive.
Sara films no one. She watches.
For a moment, she has made something good.
EXT. GRAVEYARD - NIGHT
Finely enters alone. He removes his work glove.
The birthmark crosses the inside of his wrist where the grocery scanner once found it.
A GRAVEYARD CHILD steps from behind a stone.
CHILD
Did you expire?
FINELY
No.
The child takes Finely's arm and turns the inside of his wrist toward the moon.
Finely looks toward the school.
CHILD
Can you whistle now?
Finely tries.
A thin note escapes, then dies.
FINELY
Sometimes.
The child vanishes between stones, or simply walks away where the dark keeps her.
The sheep-ant crosses Finely's boot.
He offers a finger.
It passes him by.
EXT. CONVENIENCE STORE - DAY
Sara grips the payphone.
SARA
Grant submission one-eight-four-seven-seven-three-eight-eight-e.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
You have been awarded the grant pending acceptance.
Sara closes her eyes.
SARA
Right. I need until Thursday.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
Orientation is Friday. The program begins Monday.
SARA
I know. I just need to finish something here.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
Confirmation by five Thursday or the award transfers to the alternate.
SARA
Can you hold it longer?
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
No.
SARA
Right. Thursday.
She hangs up.
On the back of her checklist she writes:
GRANT -- THURSDAY, 5:00.
She does not check it off.
INT. SARA'S HOUSE - DAY
Sara searches Martha's tapes for garden footage.
One begins in the old living room instead.
YOUNG MARTHA (TV)
You're home early.
Young Sara enters, face blotched from crying, the day of the playground.
YOUNG SARA (TV)
Let's film.
EXT. MARTHA'S GARDEN - ON VHS - DAY
Young Martha sets the camera.
YOUNG MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
YOUNG SARA
Hi, Mom.
YOUNG MARTHA
How's grad school?
YOUNG SARA
Finished. Great job. Good retirement.
Her acting is so bad Martha begins to laugh.
YOUNG MARTHA
Tell me a joke. Quick.
YOUNG SARA
The one about the Lincoln and Cadillac?
They dissolve into helpless laughter.
Adult Sara laughs too.
Onscreen, the laughter fades.
YOUNG SARA (TV)
Maybe I should watch this too. So when you...
YOUNG MARTHA (TV)
You get your own time machine.
YOUNG SARA (TV)
What will the future be like?
YOUNG MARTHA (TV)
Same. Different. More machines.
YOUNG SARA (TV)
Because they're the future?
YOUNG MARTHA (TV)
Align yourself with them. No one has to worry if you do that.
YOUNG SARA (TV)
I can't do this without you.
YOUNG MARTHA (TV)
You'll be okay.
Young Martha reaches for her. The video dissolves. Her hand becomes static. The tape has nothing after it.
Adult Sara rewinds.
YOUNG MARTHA (TV) (CONT'D)
You'll be okay.
The reach. The static.
Rewind.
YOUNG MARTHA (TV) (CONT'D)
You'll be okay.
Sara stops the tape.
In her childhood room, she adds to the checklist:
3.5 FIX MOM'S TIME MACHINE.
She boxes it.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - NIGHT
Finely makes VHS copies in a maintenance closet.
He distributes them room to room.
One resident slams a door.
Another takes the tape and uses it to level a table.
A third watches.
MONTAGE - THE PROGRAM SPREADS
-- Ted argues with the movement tape and keeps moving.
-- Elsie watches the Tattoo Man dance, then uses her walker as a partner.
-- Mr. Vale waters a plastic plant. Nurse Ellis replaces it with a real one without comment.
-- Penny watches Daily Douse through her headphones and reaches one foot into the movement rhythm. When Sara notices, Penny stops.
-- Finely unplugs Douse in one room and inserts Sara's tape. The resident plugs Douse back in. Finely bows to the decision.
-- Martha's hands: extract, plant, nurture.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
A garden cart waits by the door.
Martha, Ted and several residents stand around it. Finely pushes.
Nurse Ellis checks a clipboard.
NURSE ELLIS
Two trowels. One cultivator. One Hori Hori.
FINELY
And one scythe.
NURSE ELLIS
No scythe.
FINELY
Decorative scythe.
NURSE ELLIS
Especially no decorative scythe.
She hands the Hori Hori to Finely.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
You carry it. One person uses it at a time. Tools stay inside the bricks. I count everything when we come back.
TED
Prison garden.
NURSE ELLIS
Prison has a better budget.
The doors open.
The residents enter sunlight.
They work badly and specifically.
Ted waters leaves, his own shoes, then one actual root.
Elsie plants marigolds in no discernible row.
Mr. Vale refuses to touch dirt but gives instructions to everybody who does.
Martha points at a dandelion.
MARTHA
That one.
Finely kneels beside her and guides the Hori Hori into the earth. Together they extract it.
The root breaks.
Martha stares at the half root.
MARTHA (CONT'D)
Again.
NURSE ELLIS
Not that one. It's out.
Martha searches the soil for the missing remainder.
Finely redirects her to another weed.
FINELY
This one insulted your family.
Martha studies it.
MARTHA
No.
FINELY
Mine, then.
She takes the tool from him.
Three quick strikes around the root. The tape's rhythm, exact. Then the pull.
Whole root.
MARTHA
Good.
Finely returns the blade to the basket.
Sara watches from the doorway, camcorder lowered.
The work continues without her image.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - LATER
The irregular garden thrives.
A DOUSE LANDSCAPING truck arrives. The FOREMAN surveys the residents' work.
FOREMAN
We're scheduled.
FINELY
Nothing left to do.
FOREMAN
Scheduled isn't the same as needed.
Nurse Ellis arrives with the tool clipboard.
NURSE ELLIS
We aren't paying for work that isn't done.
FOREMAN
You aren't paying.
He points to the Daily Douse sign.
FOREMAN (CONT'D)
He is.
FINELY
Then he saved money.
FOREMAN
That's not how a service contract works.
Goes back to his truck. Takes out a camera. Photographs the garden, framing Martha, Ted and Finely.
FINELY
Tell Douse we're done.
The Foreman looks at Finely. Finely is already back to the weeds.
The crew leaves.
NURSE ELLIS
You enjoy being suspended before breakfast.
FINELY
Keeps the day open.
Sara sees a DAILY DOUSE decal on the departing truck.
The signal doesn't stop at the televisions.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - LATER
The landscaping truck returns with Ken's production van behind it.
Ken enters the garden already speaking to camera.
KEN DOUSE
A sponsored sanctuary has become the latest victim of unauthorized human interference.
SNAP.
The Assistant powders him while he walks.
SNAP. SNAP.
The Cameraman swings wide to include the residents' irregular garden.
The Foreman points toward Finely.
FOREMAN
That's him.
Ken points. A BOOM OPERATOR places the microphone beneath Finely's mouth.
KEN DOUSE
Why did you deny trained professionals trying to provide valuable services?
FINELY
The residents were using the dirt.
KEN DOUSE
Dirt has uses. So does asbestos.
Ted raises his plastic shovel.
TED
Want to see one?
Ken circles one finger. The crew shifts so Ted disappears behind him.
Sara steps back into the shot.
SARA
They grew the garden.
Ken studies her.
KEN DOUSE
You were in my class.
SARA
I'm sorry. I don't...
KEN DOUSE
You don't remember. You told me I couldn't be a shepherd.
Sara finds the boy inside the face.
SARA
Oh. Right. Ken.
KEN DOUSE
Ken Douse.
SARA
Thought you looked familiar.
KEN DOUSE
No, you didn't. But that was kind.
He says it without bitterness, which is somehow worse.
KEN DOUSE
You moved the whole school that day. Amazing. Really amazing.
Behind him, PENNY has wandered outside. The lights and crowd confuse her.
PENNY
Is the building on fire?
Ken's camera begins to turn toward her.
SARA
No.
Ken raises one palm. The crew freezes.
For Penny, quietly:
KEN DOUSE
Nothing's on fire.
Penny looks at him.
PENNY
Then why are you talking like that?
Ken has no broadcast answer.
The red tally light returns.
His voice returns with it.
KEN DOUSE
But tonight, families are asking whether an untested program has placed Sunny Brook's most vulnerable residents at risk.
SARA
You don't even believe that.
He snaps and points.
The Boom Operator moves the microphone from Sara to the Foreman.
The snap moves everyone it touches. He aims it at the crew, at the Foreman, past her, around her.
Never at her. He has never once pointed those two fingers at Sara. Not in twelve years of pointing them at everything else.
Sara watches the crew obey.
She knows the movement.
On his way back to the van, Ken passes the day room window.
Inside, the television is on.
It is not showing him.
A homemade image: Martha's hands in soil, filmed close and steady. Taped to the set, a handwritten card: SEP #1 -- GARDEN.
Around it, residents lean in. Learning. Watching the way his audience used to watch.
Ken stands at the glass.
He looks at the garden the residents grew. It is good work. He can tell. It is the family business.
Then back at the television that replaced him.
Nobody powders him. Nobody counts him in. He watches the whole reel, off-air, alone.
By the time he walks to the van, he knows whose hands those are.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
Martha works with a plastic shovel.
Sara approaches.
MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
MARTHA
How's grad school?
SARA
Finished. Got a great job.
MARTHA
Really? So happy for you.
SARA
Things are good. Great. No need to worry.
Martha considers this.
MARTHA
Good.
Sara waits for the rest of the recorded line.
It does not come.
SARA
Good?
Martha returns to her plant.
Sara kneels and hugs her.
SARA (CONT'D)
We're close. I just have to finish the time machine. Then Thursday I say yes.
Martha pats soil from Sara's knee.
Not approval. Just soil.
EXT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
Sara, riding her bike, sees Matt in the Laundromat. Inside, dryers turn. Several adults sit in varying states of undress, watching their clothes tumble.
She stops. Can't figure it out.
One man wears three neckties and no shirt. A woman in a slip slow-dances with an empty laundry basket. Another man presses both palms to a dryer as though visiting someone through glass.
At the center of it all, Matt takes notes in his boxer shorts.
Sara stares, still carrying Martha's soil on one knee.
Matt looks up. Delighted.
He waves her in.
Sara does not move.
He waves bigger, then points to the door as though she may have forgotten how buildings work.
The woman with the basket opens it from inside.
WOMAN WITH BASKET
You coming in or not?
Sara shrugs and enters.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - CONTINUOUS
The door shuts behind Sara.
The room is warmer than it looked. Every dryer has a witness.
Matt hurries over with a notebook.
MATT
Before you decide, I've stopped turning strangers into involuntary case studies.
Sara takes in the boxer shorts. The neckties. The solemn dryer visitation.
SARA
No.
MATT
That sounded pre-decided.
SARA
That's a high floor.
He pinches the shoulder of her blue shirt.
MATT
You chose this?
SARA
Yes.
MATT
Clothes aren't arbitrary. Choice, habit, touch. A thread of you in everything you wear.
SARA
And then you make people take them off in public.
MATT
Private-adjacent.
Across the room, ELSIE watches a red blouse turn.
MATT (CONT'D)
When things become unhinged, things become clear.
A beat.
MATT (CONT'D)
Try it?
SARA
No.
He nods. It costs him.
MATT
Before you leave? Before you go to New York?
SARA
I don't know.
MATT
You got the grant?
SARA
Pending acceptance. Thursday at five.
MATT
So, New York. It's happening.
SARA
It's happening.
MATT
Nobody goes to New York.
SARA
People go there every day.
MATT
People. Not people from here.
SARA
Mom planned it before I knew what it was.
MATT
What about your mom?
SARA
I'm fixing her time machine.
MATT
What does that mean?
SARA
She'll be okay. I'll be okay.
Matt absorbs that. There was no room for him.
INT. MARTHA'S ROOM - NIGHT
Martha and Penny sleep.
Sara removes the gardening tape and restores the TIME MACHINE.
Onscreen, Young Martha and Young Sara laugh.
Sara gently wakes Martha.
Martha finds the line.
MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
Martha mouths herself back into the loop.
Sara sinks into the chair, relieved and devastated.
She falls asleep.
Finely appears in the doorway holding a stack of copied movement tapes.
He sees the Time Machine restored.
He sets one copy on the table anyway.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Sara rides her bike home.
A LOST DOG wanders into traffic. A car bears down.
Sara skids the bike to a stop and CLAPS an odd rhythm.
The dog stops, sees the car and darts clear.
Sara claps again toward the sidewalk.
The dog looks at her, then runs the opposite direction toward its owner.
SARA
That works too.
The dog disappears into the woods.
Sara follows its path and finds her sun-faded childhood backpack beneath leaves.
Inside: nothing.
An ANT crosses the zipper.
Sara offers a finger. It climbs to her shoulder.
SARA (CONT'D)
Firstborn.
INT. SARA'S BEDROOM - DAY
Sara unrolls the SHEP AND HIS HERD poster. Finds the old broadcast tape.
Onscreen, the Shepherd gives that fatherly glance.
Sara scrubs the tape backward and runs it again. Hunting.
There. A glitch frame. The staff hand open toward the lens and on it, the tattoo.
SARA
Shep.
She already knew. She needed the machine to say it too.
She looks at the ant. The ant contributes nothing.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - LATE AFTERNOON
Residents work. Finely supervises with Nurse Ellis.
Martha hums the graveyard tune without quite whistling it.
Sara enters with a suitcase.
SARA
I'm leaving. Got the grant and...
FINELY
Then this is poorly placed luggage.
SARA
I wanted to say goodbye.
Finely looks at the undersized backpack strapped to the suitcase.
Something old crosses his face.
FINELY
Too many shoes.
Sara looks at him.
Martha touches the suitcase.
MARTHA
Hi, Sara.
SARA
Hi, Mom.
MARTHA
How's grad school?
SARA
Finished.
Martha waits.
SARA (CONT'D)
I don't know about the job yet.
The script has no answer for that.
Martha sees a brown leaf on a marigold and pinches it off.
Sara kisses her forehead.
SARA (CONT'D)
I'll call when I get there.
EXT. BUS STOP - DAY
Sara waits with her suitcase.
The bus arrives.
INT. BUS - CONTINUOUS
The bus passes the graveyard. Dandelion seeds cross the glass.
At the laundromat stop, a woman boards. The doors close. The bus pulls away.
Matt runs out of the laundromat in boxer shorts, his shepherd robe over one shoulder.
He chases the bus.
MATT
You promised!
Sara slides low in her seat.
SARA
(mouths, to the window)
I'll be back.
MATT
You PROMISED!
Two older women gasp. The rest of the bus starts quietly enjoying itself.
SARA
I didn't.
She turns to the passengers.
SARA (CONT'D)
I really didn't. He wanted me to. I didn't.
Outside, Matt is losing ground and not stopping.
MATT
YOU PROMISED!
Sara stares in disbelief. Then yanks the cord.
DING.
The bus comes to a controlled stop. Sara storms down the steps with her suitcase.
EXT. ROAD / BUS STOP - CONTINUOUS
Matt catches up, hands on knees.
MATT
(barely air)
You... promised.
SARA
I never promised. I said I didn't know.
MATT
Everything changes. That's the whole point. With this. Now. Just try.
SARA
Things change, Matt. They do. I have.
MATT
You don't mean that. You're still helping your mom. I know who you are.
SARA
You know who I was. You know who you want me to be.
MATT
For what, then? Machines?
Behind her, the bus starts up. Sara spins. The doors are closed.
Through the glass, the BUS DRIVER mouths: next one's in forty minutes.
The bus leaves.
SARA
AAAAHH!
MATT
Fifteen minutes. Then come back and catch your bus. If you look and leave, I stop asking forever.
Sara glares at him.
SARA
I hate you.
MATT
Consent noted as complicated.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
Sara keeps her shirt on. Removes only her socks.
She puts them in a dryer herself.
SARA
Fifteen minutes.
MATT
Yes.
The socks turn.
Nothing.
Sara adds her blue shirt, keeping an undershirt on.
Blue and tan turn together.
Still nothing.
MATT
Are those your clothes?
SARA
They match what I wore in Mom's perfect day. They're proof.
MATT
Of what?
SARA
That everything went to plan.
MATT
Did it?
SARA
I'm done.
Sara opens the dryer and pulls out the shirt and socks.
Matt goes to his backpack.
MATT
Just one more thing.
He removes the CHILDHOOD SHEPHERD ROBE.
Sara stares.
SARA
You went back for it.
MATT
I thought you did.
SARA
I threw it away.
MATT
I know. I waited until you left. It felt less like stealing.
SARA
It wasn't.
MATT
Those clothes are a promise your mom made because she was scared.
He holds up the robe.
MATT (CONT'D)
This was yours before you knew what to be scared of.
SARA
The Shepherd was an actor, Matt.
MATT
So?
SARA
It was a show. He was pretending.
MATT
Maybe he was.
He offers the robe.
MATT (CONT'D)
You weren't.
Sara does not take it.
SARA
Not now.
MATT
Then we stop.
He lowers it.
Sara looks at the dryers. Different bodies of clothes. Different rhythms.
Then at the robe in Matt's lowered hand. At the hem, small, even stitches. Her mother made it. Before the rule. Before the list.
She takes the robe from him and puts it in the dryer herself.
Presses START.
The robe begins to turn.
THUMP.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK SERVICE DRIVE - DAY
Ken stands behind the landscaping truck with the Foreman and THREE LANDSCAPERS.
The Foreman holds a plain burlap sack open. Inside: DIRT BALLS. Dozens, packed tight. A seed head bristles from one like a fuse.
FOREMAN
You want us to throw dirt at the garden.
KEN DOUSE
I want you to restore the conditions under which our services became necessary.
FOREMAN
Throw dirt.
KEN DOUSE
Quietly.
He lifts one ball and turns it. Purple-green spines catch the light.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
Somebody has been seeding this town's lawns for weeks. Gutters. Rooftops. Difficult men's yards. Dandelions, mostly. Amateur work.
KEN DOUSE
Thistles. Then they'll stop pulling. Old people don't wear gloves. And we will be needed again.
Ken points toward the residents' garden and SNAPS.
One Landscaper starts a leaf blower.
Then stares down at the machine, baffled by his own hands.
LANDSCAPER 1
What the...?
KEN DOUSE
One ball per bed. High arc. Nature drops things. It does not pitch them.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
The Tattoo Man walks toward Sunny Brook carrying a bunch of dandelions.
Roots. Dirt. Grass caught among them.
He tries arranging them.
They get worse.
THUMP.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
The robe climbs the inside of the dryer.
Falls.
THUMP.
Sara watches despite herself.
Across the room, two REGULARS fold towels in their undershirts, unbothered.
THUMP.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY
The Tattoo Man approaches the entrance.
Nurse Ellis comes out pushing an empty wheelchair.
She eyes the dandelions.
NURSE ELLIS
You bringing those inside?
TATTOO MAN
That was the plan.
NURSE ELLIS
They're weeds.
TATTOO MAN
They have roots.
NURSE ELLIS
That is how weeds continue.
TATTOO MAN
That's the idea. Susan can plant them in her room. Something that stays after the yellow goes.
NURSE ELLIS
In what, the carpet?
TATTOO MAN
I brought dirt.
He shows her the roots as evidence. Dirt falls on the floor.
NURSE ELLIS
You certainly did.
He hides the dandelions behind his back and goes inside.
Nurse Ellis watches dirt fall from the roots.
NURSE ELLIS
I'm telling the floor.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
THUMP.
The dryer beside Sara's starts.
A button strikes its metal drum.
TAP. TAP. TAP.
THUMP. TAP. TAP.
Sara hears it.
A FLASH:
Young Sara taps her staff beside a line of sheep-ants.
BACK TO SCENE
The robe turns.
Sara's shoulders come down, one notch at a time.
A FLASH:
Martha holds the shepherd headdress toward Young Sara, smaller, years earlier. The robe's hem is still pinned, half-sewn.
YOUNG MARTHA
It's who you are.
BACK TO SCENE
A smile crosses Sara's face without asking her first.
INT. SUNNY BROOK HALLWAY - DAY
The Tattoo Man walks past rooms full of YOUR DAILY DOUSE.
KEN DOUSE (TV)
...because once fear enters the home, it rarely wipes its feet.
The Tattoo Man looks at the dirt falling from his flowers.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
Susan sits on a bench with the Tattoo Man's folded handkerchief in her lap.
Nurse Ellis sets the tool basket beside the raised bed and parks the empty wheelchair by the garden door.
NURSE ELLIS
Same rules. Ask before taking. Tools stay inside the bricks.
Martha points to the Hori Hori.
MARTHA
That one.
NURSE ELLIS
Finely helps with that one.
Martha looks around. No Finely.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
Not today.
She says it evenly. The paperwork that made it true came from a landscaping company.
Nurse Ellis kneels beside her. Together they remove one dandelion.
A RESIDENT calls from the garden door.
RESIDENT
Nurse Ellis? The chair is biting me.
NURSE ELLIS
Coming. Don't bite it back.
She sets the Hori Hori in the basket. You don't carry a blade to an emergency, and steps to the doorway, still within sight. The Resident's blanket is caught in a wheel.
Martha kneels at the edge of the garden.
She presses the earth flat around a new plant.
Nurture.
She reaches into the basket for the Hori Hori knife.
A DANDELION grows between two paving stones.
Martha inserts the blade beside its root.
Extract.
The root comes out whole.
Martha smiles.
The Tattoo Man enters the garden and sees Susan.
He puts the dandelions behind his back.
TATTOO MAN
Good afternoon.
Susan looks at him.
SUSAN
You're dirty.
TATTOO MAN
I brought some with me.
He walks toward her.
Yellow flowers peek out from behind his arm.
Martha sees them.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
THUMP. TAP. TAP.
The robe turns.
A FLASH:
The Boy lies bruised beneath the jungle gym.
Young Sara reaches him.
YOUNG SARA
You'll be fine.
The Boy looks terrified.
Not relieved.
His eyes close against her.
BACK TO SCENE
Sara moves closer to the dryer.
Whatever that memory usually costs her, this time it arrives and simply sits beside her.
She lets it.
The dryer turns.
THUMP.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
The Tattoo Man reaches Susan.
TATTOO MAN
I have something for you.
SUSAN
I have one already.
TATTOO MAN
You don't know what it is.
SUSAN
Neither do you.
TATTOO MAN
It has roots. We can put it in your room and keep it going.
SUSAN
My room already keeps going.
He smiles.
Behind him, Martha stands with the Hori Hori knife.
Her eyes remain on the yellow flowers.
The Tattoo Man begins bringing the bouquet around.
Martha steps forward.
She reaches for the dandelions with the knife still in her hand.
The Tattoo Man turns toward Susan.
Martha plants the blade beside the stems. Three quick, practiced thrusts.
The Tattoo Man stops.
Looks down.
TATTOO MAN
Oh.
The bouquet drops.
Yellow scatters across the grass.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
The robe drops inside the dryer.
THUMP.
Sara flinches.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
The Tattoo Man sinks to his knees.
Martha kneels beside him.
She does not look at the blood.
She inserts the Hori Hori beside a fallen dandelion.
Extract.
She places it in her palm.
Moves to the next.
Extract.
The Tattoo Man looks at Martha's hand.
Then the flowers.
Then Susan.
He understands.
Nurse Ellis rushes into the garden.
NURSE ELLIS
Martha!
Martha's hand rests over the Hori Hori on the ground.
Nurse Ellis KICKS the knife beyond the garden bricks.
She reaches for Martha.
The Tattoo Man catches Nurse Ellis's wrist.
Barely.
TATTOO MAN
Easy.
Nurse Ellis stops pulling.
The Tattoo Man takes one dandelion from Martha's palm.
He reaches it toward Susan.
Susan looks at the flower.
Then at him.
She takes it.
The Tattoo Man lowers his hand.
Susan places the flower in the fold of his handkerchief.
Nurse Ellis presses both hands against his wound.
NURSE ELLIS
Stay with me.
She looks toward the garden door. An emergency phone hangs just inside.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
Susan, stay here.
Susan is already staying.
Nurse Ellis runs to the emergency phone.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
THUMP. TAP. TAP.
Sara puts one hand against the glass.
The robe passes beneath it.
A FLASH:
Young Sara's hand over an ant.
Susan's hand correcting the Tattoo Man's.
Finely's hand pulling a plug from a television.
Martha's hand on the camcorder.
And this time, the memory does not cut away.
EXT. MARTHA'S GARDEN - DAY - MEMORY
The same afternoon. Not the tape, the day itself. No grain. No tracking lines. Ordinary light.
YOUNG MARTHA
You'll be okay.
And then the part the machine turned to static:
Her reach lands.
She pulls Young Sara in and holds her.
Dirt on both of them. Nobody performs anything.
On the tripod, the camcorder's little red light dies. The tape has run out. The machine hums on, recording nothing.
Neither of them moves to fix it.
The afternoon continues without a lesson in it.
They garden. Young Sara plants a weed back in, solemnly, just to watch her mother laugh and pull it out again.
Extract.
They play a game with no name and no winner, invented that afternoon and never played again.
They laugh at things no camera would know to keep.
The light goes long. The garden goes gold. Nobody films it.
Martha holds her until the holding is just how they are standing.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
Sara hears all the dryers now.
Different speeds. Different weights.
No two the same.
Still a rhythm.
She laughs once -- a small, startled sound, like something returned to her.
She leans her forehead against the warm glass.
For the first time since the bus, she is nowhere else.
INT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN DOOR - DAY
Nurse Ellis yanks the emergency phone from its cradle.
NURSE ELLIS
Sunny Brook. Garden entrance. A man has been stabbed. Send an ambulance now.
She looks through the door window.
Her view is blocked by the empty wheelchair she pushed outside earlier.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
Finely runs into the garden from the far path. Sent home an hour ago, here anyway.
He sees the Tattoo Man on the ground.
Susan beside him.
Martha kneeling among the dandelions.
FINELY
Martha.
Martha looks at him.
She holds up a dandelion root. Complete.
MARTHA
Good.
There is blood on her hand.
Finely looks at the blood.
At the root.
At Susan, whose hands hold the folded handkerchief against the wound.
Finely goes to the Tattoo Man.
Two fingers to the neck. Unhurried. The way a man checks who has checked before.
Nothing.
He waits anyway.
Nothing.
The Tattoo Man is gone. There is no one left to save. There is only what happens next.
He understands.
He kneels and takes Martha's bloody hand in both of his.
Gently, the way you clean a child's scraped palm, he wipes it against the front of his shirt until the hand is only a hand again.
Martha lets him. She is already looking for the next dandelion.
Finely scans the grass.
The Hori Hori lies beyond the garden bricks, where someone kicked it.
He looks at it a long moment.
He does not want this.
His eyes go to Martha. To the graveyard beyond the fence. Back to the knife.
Somewhere in him a scale settles: what she and Sara are worth, against what he believes he is for.
It is not close. It's still hard.
He does not see Nurse Ellis behind the wheelchair at the garden door.
Finely picks up the knife.
Sirens in the distance.
He closes his eyes.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK SERVICE DRIVE - DAY
Ken sits low in his sedan, parked out of sight of the building, watching the fence line in his mirrors.
At the hedge, the three landscapers lob dirt bombs over into the far beds, one at a time.
Ken SNAPS through the open window. One snap, one throw. Two snaps, hold.
He conducts the bombardment without looking at it, checking angles in the mirrors like a man playing a machine at an arcade.
Ken's POLICE SCANNER crackles.
SCANNER (V.O.)
...reported stabbing at Sunny Brook Assisted Living... one male down... units responding...
Ken's next snap dies between his fingers.
He sits up. Sirens, far off, closing. Staff running past the end of the building.
Ken is out of the car and into the trunk. He pulls out an old school camcorder.
Ken snaps the landscapers into a formation. Hands Landscaper 2 the giant camcorder.
Landscaper 2 hoists the camcorder onto his shoulder. It tips him half a step sideways.
Snap. A red RECORD light blinks on.
Ken runs toward the entrance. They follow.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
The dryer slows.
The robe takes one last soft turn and settles against the glass.
Click.
Silence.
Around her, the other machines have finished without her noticing.
Sara surfaces like a swimmer.
She turns to Matt.
MATT
Out of quarters.
The laundromat is empty. The regulars left at some point. Mid-cycle, mid-trance. Sara never saw them go.
In the new silence, the wall-mounted television is suddenly very clear.
Sara pulls her shirt back on.
Then opens the dryer and pulls the warm robe over it.
The robe barely reaches her waist.
MATT (CONT'D)
You grew.
Sara looks at herself in the dark dryer glass.
SARA
No.
She pulls the robe down.
It goes right back up.
SARA (CONT'D)
It shrank.
She smiles.
MATT
(smiling)
Yeah.
The television CHANGES.
JITTERY HANDHELD VIDEO fills the screen. Ken appears sideways, then lurches upright as the camcorder is turned the correct way round.
A stamp in the corner: RECORDED EARLIER.
Behind Ken, a Landscaper holds a rake over his head like a boom microphone. Another aims a leaf blower at Finely as if it were a camera.
KEN DOUSE (TV)
We interrupt our ongoing report on things that may already be inside your home...
Sara turns.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY - ON TELEVISION (TAPE)
Ken stands in front of the entrance in the pitching, handheld frame of his own personal camcorder.
Police cars arrive behind him. Staff and residents collect at the windows.
KEN DOUSE
...with violence at Sunny Brook Assisted Living, where one man is dead and another has been found holding what appears to be the weapon.
Finely is visible beyond Ken, still holding the Hori Hori knife.
Two officers point their weapons at him.
OFFICER
Put it down!
Finely looks toward the graveyard.
He begins to whistle.
Thin at first.
Then clear.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
SARA
No...
Matt squints at the man holding the knife.
MATT
He looks different without his scythe.
SARA
What?
Sara moves closer to the television.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY - ON TELEVISION (TAPE)
The RECORDED EARLIER stamp holds in the corner.
KEN DOUSE
Sources describe an unprecedented degree of brutality...
Ken circles one finger.
All three Landscapers walk in a circle around him. The camcorder stays where it is.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
The camera. Circle the camera.
Landscaper 2 circles Ken with the camcorder, listing under its weight. Landscaper 1 follows with the rake. The third continues alone, unsure when to stop.
Behind Ken, Nurse Ellis guides Martha toward the building.
Martha stops beside a concrete planter.
A single dandelion grows from it.
Martha bends.
Two fingers close around the stem.
Her other hand makes the same small cutting motion she learned from Sara's tape.
Extract.
Nurse Ellis gently moves her on.
Ken's PRODUCTION VAN screeches into the lot behind them.
The Cameraman, Boom Operator and Assistant jump out and stop at the sight of the landscaping crew.
CAMERAMAN
What are they doing?
Ken does not explain.
SNAP.
The Assistant powders him while moving.
SNAP. SNAP.
The Boom Operator takes the rake from Landscaper 1 and substitutes a real microphone.
The Cameraman's hand reaches INTO FRAME and closes over the lens.
The image lurches once.
STATIC.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
On the television, the static resolves into a LEVEL BROADCAST FRAME.
A LIVE bug replaces RECORDED EARLIER.
Ken stands polished at center, the landscapers banished to the background. The big camcorder sits abandoned on the van's hood, its tape door hanging open.
Sara stares at the television.
SARA
My mom.
MATT
What?
A FLASH:
Martha's hand closing around the silk flower in Penny's cup.
BACK TO SCENE
SARA
The flowers.
Sara scans the live frame.
No Martha. No Nurse Ellis. The doorway where they stood is empty.
On television, police force Finely to his knees.
Sara runs for the door.
MATT (CONT'D)
Your socks.
She keeps running.
Matt looks at the abandoned socks.
Then at his own backpack.
MATT (CONT'D)
Stupid buttons.
He runs after her.
The television continues without them.
KEN DOUSE (TV)
Fear has entered Sunny Brook. The question now is whether anyone will be safe when it leaves.
The dryers stand open and silent.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Sara runs in the shrunken shepherd robe.
At the road's edge, without breaking stride, her hand drops and takes up a fallen BRANCH.
She does not decide to. The hand knows the shape.
Matt follows, carrying Sara's socks and trying to put on his own shepherd robe while running.
Ahead, a CITY BUS sits caught mid-turn across both lanes. The driver stopped halfway to look where the sirens went, and the town stacked up behind him.
A delivery van noses around it. Cars pile behind both.
Passengers step off the bus and fill the shoulder. Everyone is looking toward Sunny Brook.
Sara tries the ditch.
A dog on a long leash blocks it.
She tries the road.
A man with a hand truck blocks that.
SARA
Excuse me. Sorry. Excuse me.
Nobody hears her over HORNS and SHOUTING.
Sara looks down. The branch is already in her hand.
She strikes it once against the pavement.
CLAP.
Heads turn.
She strikes a second rhythm.
CLAP. CLAP.
The passengers shift toward the shoulder.
The man pulls back his hand truck.
The dog follows its owner.
The van reverses.
A path opens straight through the confusion.
Sara runs through it.
Matt stops at the opening.
MATT
You did that.
Sara looks back at the people.
They stand where the rhythm placed them, confused by their own cooperation.
SARA
Come on.
Matt follows.
Behind them, everyone begins moving at once again.
The path disappears.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY
Police cars. An ambulance. Staff. Residents at windows.
And cameras.
The landscaping crew hovers at the edge of Ken's real production crew, still holding the rake, leaf blower and half-empty sack of dirt bombs. Nobody has told them whether they are released.
Landscaper 2 rubs the shoulder that carried the camcorder, a veteran now.
Ken Douse stands in the center of it all.
KEN DOUSE
The suspect has been taken into custody, though authorities have not yet explained the whistling.
SNAP.
The Assistant powders his forehead without entering the frame.
SNAP. SNAP.
The Cameraman widens to reveal Finely kneeling with his hands behind his head.
An officer bags the Hori Hori knife.
Martha stands inside the nursing-home entrance between Nurse Ellis and another staff member.
Susan sits in a wheelchair near the ambulance. The dandelion remains tucked inside the folded handkerchief on her lap.
Police. Staff. Crew. Equipment. Watching faces.
Rings around Finely.
Nurse Ellis sees it from the entrance. The kneeling, the cameras, the bagged knife assembling into a story.
She leaves Martha with the staff member and pushes through the ring, genuinely baffled.
NURSE ELLIS
What are you doing? He didn't...
Ken points. The Boom Operator swings instantly to Ellis.
KEN DOUSE
You saw the attack?
NURSE ELLIS
I kicked the knife away from the...
She stops herself.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
I kicked it away and called 911. When I came back, he had picked it up.
She points at Finely.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
He didn't stab anyone.
An OFFICER looks from Ellis to Finely.
OFFICER
Why was he holding the knife?
NURSE ELLIS
I have no idea.
To Finely:
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
What are you doing? What are you doing???
Finely looks toward the graveyard.
KEN DOUSE
Finely? Why would an innocent man try to take responsibility for a murder?
Finely tries to whistle.
Only air.
He says nothing.
Ken turns to the lens, voice dropping into significance.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
Sources close to this station suggest a possible love triangle. A silent custodian. A longtime resident. And the victim, a known flower distributor.
On the van's monitor, a graphic assembles: Finely's employee badge photo, a blurred freeze-frame of Martha from the tape, caught at the planter, the small cutting gesture frozen into evidence and, for the victim, an artist's rendering of a muscular forearm with tattoos.
A red triangle connects them.
NURSE ELLIS
That's not what happened.
At the edge of the lot, Sara and Matt come into view. Two shepherd robes at a dead run.
The Cameraman sees them first.
For an instant he is twelve again, his legs moving before he tells them to.
CAMERAMAN
Ken.
Ken follows the lens.
Sara.
Twelve years, and the story that started him has just run into his shot.
Sara stops at the edge of the rings.
For an instant, they become CHILDREN around the fallen Boy. In the center kneels Finely. The Boy, grown into a man still trying to take the blame.
Then uniforms and cameras again.
Ellis, still under the boom, points at Martha, small in the entrance beside the staff member.
NURSE ELLIS (CONT'D)
She did it. She didn't mean to. But she stabbed him.
Sara follows the pointing hand to the entrance.
SARA
Mom.
Martha does not turn. She is watching a spot of lawn near the ambulance.
Ken watches Sara say it.
He looks at Martha.
Back at Sara.
The hands on the gardening tape. The homemade films on the day room television. The mother of the only person who ever refused him.
He does not need a source close to this station.
A murder. A movement. All delivered to his lens, live.
Twelve years of manufactured emergencies, and a real one has finally arrived. He could not have produced it better.
Sara moves, into the crowd, toward the entrance.
SARA (CONT'D)
Excuse me...
Nobody hears a quiet girl at a murder. The crowd does not part.
Her mother is on the other side of it.
Sara strikes the branch once against the pavement.
CLAP.
Heads turn. A seam opens.
She strikes a rhythm and walks into it.
CLAP. CLAP-TAP. CLAP.
Bodies part in waves ahead of her. Staff, neighbors, a frightened young officer, stepping aside without deciding to, the way a playground did once.
The shepherd is back, at full strength, and she does not even notice.
Ken moves too. Toward Sara.
Matt can't keep up. Peels off toward the officers, solemn as a witness at a hearing.
MATT
For what it's worth, he came to my house one night.
The Officer turns.
OFFICER
And?
MATT
I was alone. Unarmed. Mostly unclothed.
The Officer waits.
MATT (CONT'D)
He weeded my lawn and left.
The Officer looks at Finely.
Finely offers nothing.
The Officer decides not to write any of that down.
Between Ellis, the whistling, and the lawn, he has heard enough. He lowers his weapon. Another officer removes Finely's handcuffs.
Finely walks free.
Nobody on camera notices.
Ken - SNAP. A knot of staff steps out of his way.
SNAP. SNAP. The crew swings with him like a gate on a hinge.
Sara continues to clap her way through the crowd. Direct line to her mom.
Two command languages crossing one lot. Claps from the east, snaps from the west, the crowd obeying both, a sea told to part two ways.
Near the middle, they hit each other's wake.
Her claps peel three bystanders out of Ken's path before she has even seen him. He walks through the gap she made, for free.
Then a clap lands close. Addressed to the bodies around him, not to him and Ken's knees take one soft vote before he overrules them.
He stops. Stands very still. Takes inventory.
He did not move. He is almost sure he did not move.
Almost.
He snaps at her. The same two fingers that move everyone else, aimed at Sara for the first time in his life.
Sara keeps walking.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - LIVE BROADCAST - CONTINUOUS
Sara and Ken meet in the middle of the lot.
Both stop.
Twelve years, face to face, with a boom swinging in over their heads.
KEN DOUSE
(to the lens)
The murderer's daughter is with us now.
(to her, and only her)
Hello, Sara.
She steps left. He is simply there. Right. There.
SARA
Let me through.
KEN DOUSE
We're live.
Ken points to a monitor. Showing live events. Camera lands on Martha.
Ken steps close. Off-mic. A voice only she can hear.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
Twelve years I've wondered which of us was the monster. The man who frightens people for a living. Or the girl who was too pure...but yet... this.
SARA
Ken...
KEN DOUSE
What I do never put a knife in anyone's hand.
SARA
(quiet)
I know.
Ken waits for the flinch. It doesn't come.
On the van's monitor, her live image slides in beneath the red triangle. The graphic has found its murderer.
Sara sees it.
SARA
I know. Tell him to stop.
Ken looks at the monitor. At the shot.
KEN DOUSE
Camera goes where the story is.
Still off-mic. Still a voice only she can hear.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
How about this. You make him stop. Move him.
Sara looks at him.
Ken's eyes drop to the branch in her hand.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
One clap. Move him. Hell, move them all.
Behind the lens, the lot waits. Officers, staff, crew, neighbors. A herd balanced on the edge of somebody's next command.
Sara looks at them. Really looks, for the first time since the branch came down on the pavement.
Staff who ran toward the blood. Neighbors who came because they were afraid. A young officer more frightened than anyone he is guarding.
These are not sheep.
EXT GARDEN -DAY
Martha holds Sara. No filming. Nothing. Just holds Sara.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK - DAY
Sara's hands stay at her sides. The branch stays a branch.
She looks at the entrance instead. At her mother, being converted into a story twenty feet away.
She steps toward her.
Ken moves with her. Square in her path.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
If you won't move them. Then move me.
Sara looks at him. She see the 12 year old Ken. He's a lone. And afraid.
KEN DOUSE
Move me!
SARA
(empathetic)
No. I'm not going to move you Ken.
Years of pain and anger rise up in Ken.
KEN DOUSE
MOVE ME!!! Fucking MOVE ME!!!
CAMERAMAN
Ken.
Ken doesn't turn.
CAMERAMAN (CONT'D)
We're live.
Two words, flat, professional. The medium's own voice, from the medium's own hands.
Ken's spine hears it before he does. The shoulders square. The chin finds its broadcast angle. The warmth begins assembling on his face out of pure reflex.
...and for that one second his body belongs to the tally light, and his back is no longer a wall.
Sara steps around him.
She crosses the lot. Not through anyone. Around them.
Halfway across, her hand simply opens. The branch stays where it falls.
SARA
Excuse me. Sorry. Excuse me.
People step aside because she asked. She sees their eyes. Something in each. They're beautiful.
She reaches the entrance. And her mother.
She puts her arms around Martha and holds her.
Martha's hands come up slowly and find her daughter's back. Her fingers make the small cutting motion against it.
Extract.
Sara lets her.
A long moment.
On the van's monitor, the red triangle points at nothing but the back of a shepherd robe that no longer fits.
Ken SNAPS. Reframe. Find the mother.
People gather around Sara and her mother. It's a protective shield. The camera can't find them.
Ken stands alone on his taped mark, in the emptiest ten feet in town.
He looks at the crowd. He genuinely cannot understand what he is looking at. She is not commanding anyone. She is not doing anything at all. And every body he owns is over there.
Ken starts snapping. Snapping with both hands. No one moves.
KEN DOUSE
Move.
Nothing.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
Move!!
He SNAPS. Both hands now, at the crowd, at his crew, at the town. The clean metronomic mechanism breaking into something arrhythmic, human, and awful.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
MOVE!
He's frustrated and angery and humiliated. He moves from his mark and starts agressivly peeling people around Sara and Martha. With force. Throws them out of the way. He snaps the camera over to where it can sneak a peak at sara and her mother.
He has stood in a ring around this man before. Twelve years old, part of the human screen that hid the beating. He knows exactly which job the camera is being asked to do.
Two OFFICERS detach from the crowd's edge and approach Ken. They lead Ken away.
KEN DOUSE (CONT'D)
No. No...
They walk him out of his own shot.
Behind him the tally light burns on over the lot, broadcasting to whoever is still watching: a crowd, an embrace, and no one in front of the camera at all.
Sara never sees him go.
At the edge, Matt stops beside Finely, formal as a man settling a debt.
MATT
Thank you for the extension.
Finely stares at him.
It is the only thanks anyone has offered him all day.
He has no idea what it is for.
Finely stands at the edge of it all with empty hands.
MONTAGE - IMMEDIATE CONSEQUENCES
A low piece of MUSIC begins. A pulse beneath a melody that never quite resolves.
-- The Hori Hori disappears into an evidence bag.
-- Sara's handwritten tape -- SEP #1 -- GARDEN -- follows it.
-- Martha passes through a secured memory-care door. The magnetic lock catches behind her.
-- Finely gives the Administrator his ring of keys. She gives him a cardboard box.
-- DOUSE LANDSCAPING pulls out the residents' uneven garden and installs identical shrubs. While the crew works, two men carry the sandwich board -- MAINTENANCE SPONSORED BY YOUR DAILY DOUSE -- to the truck, face down. The trucks keep running.
-- Ted watches through the window. His hand repeats the old movement against the glass.
-- INT. SUNNY BROOK COMMON ROOM - DAY
Susan sits across from the Tattoo Man's empty chair, refolding his handkerchief. The dandelion rides inside the fold.
In the doorway, Sara stops, a cardboard box of Martha's tapes in her arms.
She knows that handkerchief. She knows the terrible fold it arrived in, and the hands that surrendered it.
The dead man has had a name all week. A stranger's name, from the radio. Now he has the ones that matter: her friend. Her dancer. Shep.
Sara sets the box down where she stands. She does not film anything, fix anything, teach anything.
She crosses the room, takes a washcloth from the basket, and sits down next to Susan.
She folds.
Her fold is terrible.
Susan takes it, folds it correctly, and puts it back in front of her.
They keep working.
-- A cordless phone at Sara's ear. Through office glass, Martha passes at the far end of a locked hall.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
Your confirmation window closed Thursday. The award should have transferred to the alternate.
SARA
I know.
PHONE REPRESENTATIVE (V.O.)
This morning your file came back up.
(beat)
I didn't do anything.
Sara watches Martha disappear beyond the locked doorway.
Not Martha's answer. Not Matt's. Hers.
SARA
Give it to someone else.
-- A studio under work lights. A janitor's thumbnail lifts Ken's taped mark off the floor. It comes up in one clean strip.
Extract.
-- A living room at 7 PM. The set clicks on out of habit. Where the fear used to be: a rerun, laughing at its own jokes. The family watches anyway.
-- The laundromat, closed for the night. By the dryers, Sara's suitcase stands where she left it. Still packed. New York inside it.
Nobody has sent for it.
The music carries us past all of it.
END MONTAGE
SUPER: THREE MONTHS LATER
MONTAGE - THE LIVING
-- INT. SECURED MEMORY-CARE VISITING ROOM - DAY
A clean room. One table. Two chairs. A window in the locked door.
NURSE ELLIS unlocks it and lets Sara in. She wears this unit's badge now. She takes up a post outside the window.
Sara sits beside Martha, not across from her.
No camera. No tape. No plant. No exercise waiting to be completed.
Sara's machine-language textbook rests beside a blank grant application. NEW YORK is printed at the top. Neither is open.
Martha looks out the window.
Sara looks with her.
They sit.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Finely walks with no uniform and no destination we can see.
He tries to whistle.
Only air.
He keeps walking.
INT. LAUNDROMAT - DAY
Matt's LAUNDRO THERAPY fills the room.
Seniors in various states of undress watch their clothes orbit behind glass.
Elsie cries at her red blouse. Nobody interprets her out loud.
One man laughs at a sock stuck to the door.
Another sleeps in his undershirt.
Susan dances alone between the plastic chairs, Tattoo Man's handkerchief tied around her wrist.
Two residents begin dancing with her. None of them knows the same dance.
Matt writes furiously in a notebook.
Somebody removes a shirt and immediately demands it back.
Matt returns it.
He writes that down too.
EXT. SARA'S HOUSE - DAY
The FOR SALE sign stands in a neatly mowed yard.
Finely pushes the mower, careful around a single row of dandelions along the fence.
Nobody hired him. Nobody knows. It is broad daylight, and he is doing it anyway.
EXT. SUNNY BROOK GARDEN - DAY
Between two of the identical shrubs, one purple thistle. Blooming.
Nobody left in the garden to pull it.
INT. SECURED MEMORY-CARE VISITING ROOM - DAY
Martha's hand rests on the table between them.
Sara notices.
She does not turn it into anything.
After a while, Sara places her hand beside it.
Not touching.
Still there.
An ant crosses the table between the two hands.
Neither hand moves.
INT. MARTHA'S OLD ROOM - DAY
Penny's television plays a rerun. Martha's side of the room is stripped. Her television is still there, dark.
Penny aims her remote at the dark set and turns the volume up.
Nothing gets louder.
She leaves it that way.
EXT. ROAD - LATE AFTERNOON
Finely walks along the graveyard wall.
He turns his birthmarked wrist toward the fading light.
The date is not written there.
He closes it.
The music falls away until only his footsteps remain.
Against the iron fence: a bicycle.
Through the fence, far among the stones, under a tree, SOMEONE DANCES.
Alone. Unembarrassed. Alive.
Not well. Not far.
It is Sara. Finely is too far away to know that. He only sees what the graveyard has never once shown him: somebody in it, dancing, alive.
Finely stops.
He watches from the road.
We cannot tell whether the dancer has seen him.
We cannot tell whether he will go in.
FADE OUT.
Over black:
One WHISTLED NOTE.
Held. Human. Alive.
Then, underneath it: a DIAL TONE.
Digits, tapped fast.
A ring. A click.
And the note bends, flattens, splits, doubles into two machine tones finding each other, the way voices once found a tune among headstones.
Two machines, whistling at each other.
The handshake climbs. Multiplies. Shrieks...
CUT TO SILENCE, MID-SHRIEK.
THE END
